Thursday, August 28, 2008

SORROW

Once a lay-man said,
Adversities are crunchier than bread;
It's tough to swallow though,
But, it is a necessary foe;
A foe that's ruthless, a red chilly ant,
A monster, who wears no pant;
A leach that makes a furrow,
A hormone that secretes sorrow;
You might have heard philosophers say...
Adversities are spicier than the Bengal Bay;
I being among those who are tired of it,
They say, 'Boy! You have just tasted a bit';
Oh! God, You know, the Truth knows,
Then why are... r u... among those?


7 Comments:

At August 28, 2008 at 7:19 PM , Blogger naveen kumar said...

rhymes may well chime
but what is prime is to be sublime!

 
At August 28, 2008 at 7:24 PM , Blogger Ganesh Kumar said...

good work dude...... can feel myself

 
At August 28, 2008 at 7:24 PM , Blogger Unknown said...

nice peom mr poet :D keep it up!!!

 
At August 28, 2008 at 7:45 PM , Blogger Ganesh Kumar said...

'coz m not much of a poet
can't comment the way u wud hv anticipated !!

 
At August 29, 2008 at 5:41 AM , Blogger bhorer_khoje said...

do i see a 2nd shakespeare here ??

"sweet are the uses of adversity"... right you are...

but spicy as bay of bengal ??? hahahahha....

liked this one as well.. but i felt, its a bit superficially constructed lacking the in-depth feeling ( pardon me.. am not that a good judge of artistic wrks )

never the less.. its really good.

 
At September 28, 2008 at 12:31 AM , Blogger Olive Oyl said...

Necessary foe- without which we cant really appreciate our fortunes. ;)
short and simple, though i liked the previous poem more :)

 
At May 20, 2011 at 12:50 PM , Blogger Ruchika said...

Its great :)

 

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